Careful Boss...

... it's quite slippery

Dear God, I actually finished something!
I've written a list of everything I want to draw during the holiday (a lot of it is stuff I want to take to Amecon) and I've actually made a pretty good start on it, rather than leaving it until the last minute like I usually do -_-

Anyway, a month ago I was thinking how much I missed MGS3 (I was planning on holding out for the release of Subsistence, but I caved and bought a cheap copy on eBay XD ) and since I started playing again, I reignited my love of the Cobra Unit - Joy and Sorrow in particular. I tried to replicate the way Boss looked in her flashback as best as I could, but I don't have any screenshots of that FMV so it's not perfect (and I figured that The Sorrow would have a little more hair :3 )
Story is, I was day-dreaming and sort of imagined a situation where The Sorrow was out in the rain (thinking about things) and Boss went to check on him.
Yes it's mushy and The Boss is a bit out-of-character, but I'm going to draw a group pic and I wanted to do something cute first

Stuff to work on:
*Sorrow's left shoulder looks a little out of place (so does his arm for that matter)
*The Boss's head seems to be a bit disconnected from her neck in relation to the curve of her back (and perhaps somewhat out of proportion to her body)
*Her palm also looks a bit short and flat
*I suck at painting rain XD
Anything else would be helpful

One last thing: Any over-zealous fans that decide a drawing is "wrong" just because the characters don't look the way they want them too can go to hell, because I'm getting tired of this. Any crits I am looking for are based on technique